hey, tara's cousin over here. Umm loving "tara's song". But is there anyway you could reduce the tempo, just slightly? Im thinking of ummm words for it, only if your up for it ofcourse. =D im not saying im fantastic at this. LMAO. btw
well no comment from michelle will be worth reading unless there is some criticism somewhere.Well, Maybe you would want to add abit of dynamics and expressive techniques in a number of your songs. Its abit to repetitive. Like the chords and all (for example in "AMIE" and the, im guessing, refrain/chorus bit of "150 years" and intro of "City of Joy")BUT if thats how you want to roll, its all good brother. :) Also, try to make your intro abit shorter (maybe).
on a slightly brighter note, I like "150 years" great mix of instruments in introduction:D I also love interlude"good stuff.
in conclusion, why not writing words to this:) Your girlfriend can write great stuff, btw. Can you sing? bwhahhaha
you take medicine, right? how do you ahve time for this? sigh*
Incredible sounds. You're one talented soul! I like 150 years and Tokyo! Can't wait to hear more of your work! Fancy making any CD compilations? ;)
Cheers,
Chinny
thanks so much for all the encouraging feed back! it means a lot to me. and its so nice to see people enjoying music too!
isaac
i say u shud start up a myspace music page!
I like 150 yrs and water =)
well no comment from michelle will be worth reading unless there is some criticism somewhere.Well, Maybe you would want to add abit of dynamics and expressive techniques in a number of your songs. Its abit to repetitive. Like the chords and all (for example in "AMIE" and the, im guessing, refrain/chorus bit of "150 years" and intro of "City of Joy")BUT if thats how you want to roll, its all good brother. :) Also, try to make your intro abit shorter (maybe).
on a slightly brighter note, I like "150 years" great mix of instruments in introduction:D I also love interlude"good stuff.
in conclusion, why not writing words to this:) Your girlfriend can write great stuff, btw. Can you sing? bwhahhaha
you take medicine, right? how do you ahve time for this? sigh*
anyway adios chico!